My Dilema
I just got news today that 7 of my poems are being published which has me very excited . one of them is one of three finalists for a ten thousand dollar grand prize i hope i get it i need the money but this is the poem
Life is a weak adventure
However death is the ultimate one
How can I face the thrilling adventure of death
If I can not face the mere travels of life
So you know i wrote this when i was fifteen when i was going through a bad part of my life, I recieved an F on it in school when it came from the heart
well haha to them and fuck them it is being reconized all i want os for one person to understand relate and remember it
Please give me your honest comments i want to write i know my spelling sucks but i did spell chek on original